Hello everyone,
thank you so much for such warm welcome
and giving so much love
Here is my first post.
Hope you will like it
Let Me Fly…
Let me fly..
Night was dark, wings were feeble..
Yes I failed in my last attempt to touch the sky..
Crashed on ground; cried whole night..
But let me try one more time, let me fly..
This nest is not my place..
I have whole sky to rediscover
I have whole world waiting for new definitions.
My father will be my savior on my quest
Though he is not now..
Whether its my dream..
But let me try...let me fly..
I have left whole world behind..
I have no turn to come back..
Say farewell with smile
And Let Me Fly…
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Please let me know your views about my these thoughts...
about attempt of young one to achieve his/her own place in whole world by his/her own,
Here Father is not only biological father, here by father i mean father of universe ''GOD"
Thank you for giving your precious time to read.
3 comments:
Hi jo. Congrats fr ur 1st post, which is a beautiful thought ha. N very well written by u.
For me tht its not only young ones views or wish it cn any one who wants to have his/her own place place in this world. They r alone n hv to be on their own n only He the Almighty to help thm.
N in the last para I culdnt get the 3/4/5 line.
Hey Mukta Di :)
Thanks for liking it :)
yes di you are right its a wish of every soul...to achieve new heights everyday in life.
N thnks for letting me know where i missed to clear it.:D
3/4/5 lines mean that
"I Have taken the step for which may be this world will criticize me..so this way i am detached from them..but i don't want to cry on this occasion, so Smile my loved ones and bid me farewell with smile."
Ohh woooww!! Poem abt ambition.. giving an opportunity, hope.. fab darling..
Loved it
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